This is much more coherent than the last one. Good improvement in quality over the last one. I think I'm not the demographic for this humor though (genital humor is more appealing to my highschool self, lol) But not knocking any stars off for me not being immature enough to find it funny, as my cynicism is not your fault. You definitely would be a great voice actor for alot of animators on here and that's awesome. I would say get out there on the forums and get yourself known! Well done. I scouted you in hopes that will help you get started. Good luck!